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Monday 9 March 2015

Green is the colour of poem

This is my Green Day poem.While room 19 was editing our poems Ms Hand our teacher reminded us to be descriptive and this is my finishing result.

1 comment:

  1. I really like your sentence about your dads eyes and the green smell of mold on the fire wood.

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